Age/Gender: 29, Male
Location: Hilltop, MN
If you make a decent movie, I'll be fair. If you make a crappy movie, expect a "0" from me! >:}
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Graphics: C+ (Fairly simple, but pretty good)
Style: C+ (Reminds me of a game that I used to play when I was in grade school, only this game has better animation and graphics*)
Sound: N/A
Violence: B (Only natural violence here...fish eating other fish)
Interactivity: B (Fairly decent game play, however it is a little difficult to move the fish at times).
Humor: D (A few chuckles about how this reminds me of a game I played a long time ago, but not all that funny overall)
Overall: C (Worth protecting, but it could be better)
*: Granted, the game I'm talking about was created in the 1980's
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your serious review... I guess C is not a U... right?
As I wrote in my comments I did this a while ago when I was not very experienced with drawing, programming and flash. I will take everything in consideration :).
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The story seems allright and the animation of the characters looks fairly decent. However, I see two things that can definitely improve how your movie looks.
1. Either cut out or add some life to the opening to the movie...it is annoying to have that sit on my computer screen for so long and wondering "is that all?" (I did wait long enough to actually see the movie, but other people may not have been as patient as I was).
2. Choose a better background, choose something that has some more texture and realism into it. The beach BG is a bit dull.
Also, instead of making text boxes, try making a subtitle box at the bottom of the screen. These are just a couple of things that I saw in the movie that I think can be improved upon to make it better.
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But it needs a storyline, I couldn't tell why the heck you made this movie other than to show off your characters. When you have an actual storyline, then make it into a movie, come back, and then we'll see about a protection vote.
1/5 (for now)
Author's Response:
if u took the time to actually READ with ur useless eyes, it clearly says INTRO an intro doesnt need a story line
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